You work in a busy but poorly organised office and you are keen to be promoted. Your employer needs to find a new supervisor for your department.
Write a letter to your employer. In the letter
• ask to be considered for this job
• explain why you would be a suitable candidate
• outline the current problems and the changes you would like to make
Dear Mr Moses,
my name is John employed in the Technology department possessing the position of Software Engineer in your organisation for three consecutive years. It has come to my awareness that you are looking for a new supervisor for our department. therefore, composing a letter to ask to be considered for the role of the supervisor in your organisation.
To adduce further about the problems in our department. Currently, the working flows are poorly organised or vague, effecting running projects, clients, cost, timeline and other attributes. Especially the task distribution according to employee abilities needs improvements. However, the supervisor owns the responsibility to assign a task to each person on the team according to abilities. Furthermore, completing task or work according to the timeline generates more revenue for the company. therefore, the supervisor responsibility to ensure the work being completed adequately and progressing according to schedule.
I look forward to a swift response.
Yours Sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Moses, my name is John employed in the Technolo...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...or a new supervisor for our department. therefore, composing a letter to ask to be consid...
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Line 7, column 495, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...generates more revenue for the company. therefore, the supervisor responsibility to ensur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77070063694 4.54256449028 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35867548933 2.54303337028 132% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9910290528 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3636363636 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32511420602 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106556576965 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105372831559 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1708540528 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168560193838 0.0580467560999 290% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 70.7449484536 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.59 8.71597938144 179% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.