You work in a busy but poorly organised office and you are keen to be promoted. Your employer needs to find a new supervisor for your department.Write a letter to your employer. In the letter•ask to be considered for this job•explain why you would be

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You work in a busy but poorly organised office and you are keen to be promoted. Your employer needs to find a new supervisor for your department.
Write a letter to your employer. In the letter
• ask to be considered for this job
• explain why you would be a suitable candidate
• outline the current problems and the changes you would like to make

Dear Sir,
I am writing to draw your attention towards the irregular bus service in my area, which has become an everyday concern for the people availing the facility.

I daily commuted to work using bus number 6 and that was the best option for me till now due to its exact arrival time. However, I have observed that since last 15 days the bus do not arrive at its time and the I have to wait long. Surprisingly, last Friday bus was not seen even after waiting for 30 minutes and eventually I had to choose other mode of transport to reach the office. Indeed, this has become a big headache for me as I am getting late to office often. The bus is very irregular these days and I had to stop using this facility. Consequently, I have to now rely on private transport, which is unequivocally very expensive. In this case; despite the public transport, I am refrain from its benefit. I am sure this would have created many problems for other people as well.

I would ask you to take proper action by training the staff such that bus schedule is not disturbed and the citizens can use the bus facility adequately. I expect that you would do needful at the earliest.

Yours faithfully,
XYZ

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 208, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'I'?
Suggestion: the; I
...s the bus do not arrive at its time and the I have to wait long. Surprisingly, last F...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 689, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'refrained'.
Suggestion: refrained
...ase; despite the public transport, I am refrain from its benefit. I am sure this would...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 155, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ns can use the bus facility adequately. I expect that you would do needful at the...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49315068493 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50354932467 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1072539277 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1494579 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613540314895 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469161610503 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993110417277 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027940473908 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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