You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having some
problems with the internet connection in your room.
Write to the supervisor of your residence. In your letter
Introduce yourself
Inform him / her of the situation
Request that the problem be fixed
Dear Jane,
I am Raven, University student living in on campus accommodation in South block building. I am writing this letter to you to bring it to your notice about internet problem existing in my room. I have subscribed for unlimited package 4G band connection services. However, from past 2 weeks I am facing serious connection issues. Main problem is I am not getting sufficient browsing speed and during night times my connection is almost lost.
As it is peak of my study period internet is must for my research papers and other online exams. Final preparation test is posted for end of next month. I cannot fully prepare for my presentations without speed internet. As I am overseas student my communication to family members is not possible with existing network connection. Hence, I request you to make necessary arrangement for speed and efficient Internet by this weekend. I hope you will take immediate action action to improve the quality internet service which is helpful not just for me but also for all student in my campus.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jane, I am Raven, University student living in...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t internet problem existing in my room. I have subscribed for unlimited package 4...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ght times my connection is almost lost. As it is peak of my study period interne...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y presentations without speed internet. As I am overseas student my communication ...
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Line 7, column 464, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: action
...weekend. I hope you will take immediate action action to improve the quality internet service...
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Line 7, column 575, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...not just for me but also for all student in my campus.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92655367232 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78947328799 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661016949153 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6913328924 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2727272727 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18371949038 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675905113794 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617758079391 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149302485825 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539808770078 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.