You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information center. In your letter
Tell them how long you are staying
Ask for some suggestions for what to do
Find out if there are any local events happening at the time
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to ask for some information about the Tien Giang Province, where I am planning to travel at the end of October. I will spend four days from the twenty-fifth to the twenty-nineth to discover everything at there.
I would be grateful if you can give me some suggestions about the accommodation and the restaurant. I will go with my family of two adults and two children so I need a room which have two bed rooms and toilet in it with the possible price. Besides, we also would like to enjoy the local so I need to know some good restaurants.
I was known that the local government sometimes organize the fruit festival. Are there any events like this to take place at that time?My children always wait to participate festivals.
I look forward to hearing from you
Your faithfully,
Calla Balls
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h to discover everything at there. I would be grateful if you can give me so...
^
Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t the accommodation and the restaurant. I will go with my family of two adults an...
^
Line 13, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...ts like this to take place at that time?My children always wait to participate fes...
^^
Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hearing from you Your faithfully, Calla Balls
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74496644295 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76513325061 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684563758389 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.375 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159233598528 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599910383038 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448534815107 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824159326576 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276627893354 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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