Hi Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding our last month conversation of opening cafeteria at our work place. As we are doing 2 to 11 pm shift and everyone required space to sit and have lunch or some snacks and relaxed their self. In our department there is no such space and due to that stuff of our process is not happy.
Moreover, the space to near to conference hall 1 is vacant , so we can get the approval from our management to utilise that area. Also in that space 5 to 6 stalls of snacks and refreshments can easily placed for the employee. Even if facility team want any recommendations on stall types and budget etc. I can arrange the same as my dad is in Kettering business.
I am pretty sure that it would be beneficial for the staff as well as for the company. If employees will take break then they will perform better and it will direct impact the company revenue and for those who are not leaving with they family can get food with in the office , which ease the work life balance of all workers.
I looking forward for your positive response.
Thank you
Isha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y family can get food with in the office , which ease the work life balance of all...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...he work life balance of all workers. I looking forward for your positive respo...
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Line 11, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for your positive response. Thank you Isha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42079207921 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41540355966 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678217821782 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8416201966 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1818181818 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215944694212 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657139067513 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615395960569 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105219246672 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357580973116 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.