You are working for company. You need to take a day off to help a friend and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter, you should:
• explain why want to take a day off
• say what you will do to help your friend
• suggest how your work could be covered while your are away.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to apply for a day leave on 15th December 2019. I would like to apologize for requesting a day leave on such a short notice, especially during the week when we have scheduled couple of important meetings. Last week, I received a letter from one of my close friend Sam, stating that his father has been diagnosed with blockages in his heart, and the doctor has advised his father to undergo a bypass surgery.
My friend Sam is native of Australia and has no relatives or close friends in India besides me, hence he has requested me to be present at the hospital with him. In order to help Sam, I plan to spend the night before the surgery in the hospital with uncle, so that Sam can get some rest. On the day of the surgery, I also intend to take care of the hospital formalities like filling up of medical forms, make payments etc. while Sam can spend some quality time with his father before the operation.
As, I will not be able to attend the important meetings scheduled on 15th December, I have decided to give a complete hand-over to my team who will attend the meetings in my absence. Additionally, I have asked Mr. Shah to head those meetings as he is a senior member of my team and has desired expertise. I am happy to meet you along with Mr. Shah on 12th December to brief you about the agenda and key points that will be discussed in the meetings. Kindly let me know a convenient time for the meeting.
I would appreciate, if you could consider my last-minute leave application request.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... last-minute leave application request.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 284.0 206.0 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44014084507 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48332067424 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 398.7 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.7689641438 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.083333333 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142491049597 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512988244308 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417871982351 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081240671009 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154990024062 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.