You are working overseas in an international company. You traveled back to your home country without informing your office friends. Write a apology letter to these friends.Apologies to your friend.Explain the situationWhat you enjoyed most working with th

Dear friends,

I'm writing this letter to all of you to apologize for leaving this country for the home country without informing any of you. It is making me sad to say goodbye to all of you.

I am leaving this country for Bangladesh, my home country, due to the health condition of my father. As I am the only son, my parents are totally dependent on me. Although I asked my parents to live here with me, they want to live in the countryside only. I was about to leave this job a few months later but, my father's health condition forced me to take the decision now. That's why I'm flying back in such short notice.

Leaving behind a group of friend is always heartbreaking. Surely, I'll miss my connection with you all. I was blessed to have co-workers like you by my side.

Thank you all for being nice to me the whole time.

With warm regards,

Abed

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...friend is always heartbreaking. Surely, Ill miss my connection with you all. I was ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3850931677 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38659696382 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627329192547 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3469763747 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.8333333333 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182466021541 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669851043039 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783132461026 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121750342717 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861618208724 0.0580467560999 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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