You are writing your first letter to a pen pal. Describe your previous studies and work experience, your current activities, hobbies and interests.
Tell your pen pal that you will be visiting him/her.
• You should write at least 150 words.
• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Hi Gaurav
My name is Niharika and I hope this letter finds you in health and harmony. As we are new pen pals, I hope you would also be looking a meaningful friendship here, as I am quite excited about this.
First of all, I would like to share that my highest qualification is Masters in Computer Applications from Panjab University. Being a native, most of my schooling and higher education was done in Chandigarh.
As I am a Software Engineer, most of my work includes programming, however, being an extrovert and outgoing person, I am passionate about lot of other activities too. Meeting new people, travelling, trekking, photography are few of my hobbies, along with these, my love for food is eternal. Besides trying new cuisines, I have a sweet tooth for variety of baked products.
In addition to these hobbies, I appreciate good music and watching movies, particularly thriller,action,mystery.
Despite the fact, that we have started this bond by means of letters, I would really love to meet you in person. Due to some official work,I will be travelling to your city next month, therefore I hope, we can have an opportunity to meet and have a face to face conversation over a cup of coffee. Eagerly awaiting for your revert on this.
Yours Faithfully
Niharika
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| 2021-11-01 | Niharika rani | 89 | view |
| 2021-11-01 | Niharika rani | 89 | view |
| 2021-11-01 | Niharika rani | 87 | view |
| 2021-11-01 | Niharika rani | 73 | view |
| 2021-11-01 | Niharika rani | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...igher education was done in Chandigarh. As I am a Software Engineer, most of my ...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , action
...d watching movies, particularly thriller,action,mystery. Despite the fact, that we h...
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Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...you in person. Due to some official work,I will be travelling to your city next mo...
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Line 9, column 306, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: awaiting; waiting for
...versation over a cup of coffee. Eagerly awaiting for your revert on this. Yours Faithfull...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9128440367 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11294894601 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651376146789 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4724529635 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162442911499 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614871313516 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531545963005 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692401028631 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631903136405 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.