Dear Rob,
How are you these days? I hope your work is progressing well. I am looking forward to seeing you next month. But, I am very sorry to inform you that I must change the dates of the visit.
In the middle of next month, I have an extremely important test in my master program. I don't have chane to attend the second time if I am absent in the first. In case of failing, I must study a more year, which means I would be out of school so lately.
That is the reason why I cancel the visit until the month after. I will try to see you. And we will play and talk together. I will tell you about my story. Could you be available at that time? Please suggest me the time if not.
Finally, I wish your family all the best.
Best regard,
Boorin.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: enaslam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... important test in my master program. I dont have chane to attend the second time if...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...ly, I wish your family all the best. Best regard, Boorin.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 615.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01073784136 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 290.88556701 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5621118003 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 41.0 76.5299724578 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.0 16.8248392259 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21149724844 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615731917664 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481306782405 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114593072142 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564677228446 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 2.9 8.37731958763 35% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 95.17 70.7449484536 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.5 7.45979381443 34% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.02 8.71597938144 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.03 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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