You borrowed a book from the library and book is now damaged. Write a letter to librarian and in your letter
Write details about the book
Explain how it was damaged
Mention what you want to do about it
Dear Sir,
I am writing this Letter to bring into your kind notice that the book which I lend from your library has been damaged.
The tile of the book which I borrowed was Mathematical Modeling, volume no:4, published in year 2015 and written by William.Further, it was six edition of this book.
Last Sunday, I was preparing for my mathematics exam in my study room and referring this book. The moment, when I was in kitchen to have my meal, my young brother who is 5 years old entered in the study room and torn the few pages of the book in my absence.I was very much upset with this situation because I know as per policy I will have to return book in the original condition.
Therefore, I would appreciate if you could allow me to pay you the full fee incurred on purchasing new book.Hopefully, you would understand my situation and approve my request.
I look forward to hearing you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sara Batool
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hed in year 2015 and written by William.Further, it was six edition of this book. La...
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...ng brother who is 5 years old entered in the study room and torn the few pages of...
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Suggestion: I
...the few pages of the book in my absence.I was very much upset with this situation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50837486123 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1232227289 44.8134815571 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.375 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24411239943 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10711839998 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549701753164 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141086187785 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557574971581 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.