You borrowed an important textbook during the last term from a classmate. You now realize your classmate had returned home overseas and you still have the book.
Write a letter to him/her. In your letter:
• apologize for the mistake
• find out how important the book is to him/her
• say what you will do
Hello Mohammad ,
I hope that you are doing well. I am just writing this letter to apologize to no returning your book earlier. I really got shocked when our classmate Ahmad told me that you have returned back your home to visit your parent and you will get back here next couple of weeks just before the final term exams.
I certainly, understand how much this might frustrate you and the book is extremely significant for you, particularly in the final exam preparation for Math and I saw that you almost solve all the book's exercises with informative notes in every question.
Therefore, I will send back the book by any express local or even international courier. Thus, please send me your current address, and your mobile number in order to ship the textbook urgently. As a result of this error, I will pay all the transfer fees.
Once again I am extremely sorry for such unwitting issue. please say hi for all your family.
Best regards ,
Bilal
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-27 | ahmed ahmed | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-27 | ahmed ahmed | 73 | view |
| 2019-09-24 | Agni | 61 | view |
| 2019-08-19 | Bilal-88 | 73 | view |
| 2019-08-19 | Bilal-88 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Hello Mohammad , I hope that you are doing well. I ...
^^
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Mohammad , I hope that you are doing well. I am jus...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gize to no returning your book earlier. I really got shocked when our classmate A...
^
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...r classmate Ahmad told me that you have returned back your home to visit your parent and you ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...weeks just before the final term exams. I certainly, understand how much this mi...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... just before the final term exams. I certainly, understand how much this mig...
^
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th informative notes in every question. Therefore, I will send back the book by ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rror, I will pay all the transfer fees. Once again I am extremely sorry for such...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...tremely sorry for such unwitting issue. please say hi for all your family. Best r...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sue. please say hi for all your family. Best regards , Bilal
^^^^^
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...i for all your family. Best regards , Bilal
^^
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for all your family. Best regards , Bilal
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r family. Best regards , Bilal
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77976190476 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47772777926 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690476190476 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7195094647 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299611064459 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938016890113 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784658095736 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160750300352 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928508297341 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.