Dear John,
Hope you are doing great!
I apologize that I have broken the camera that I borrowed from you last month. I feel terrible but I already ordered a new one online for you so please please forgive me.
It happened 2 days ago when I was in the central park. I put the camera on the bench for a while but a child with his mother passing me and the kid use his hand touched camera without carefulness so it dropped on the earth. I am extremely sad but I knew I should not blame the kid because that is my problem, so I went home promptly and ordered the same model for you. When we meet next time, I will give the brand a new one back to you.
I hope to see you as soon as I can that's why I am able to apologize to you in person.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: please
...ady ordered a new one online for you so please please forgive me. It happened 2 days ago w...
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Line 9, column 36, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
.... I hope to see you as soon as I can thats why I am able to apologize to you in pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 616.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.94871794872 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08509787207 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8882814562 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154928707756 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065613864382 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653310176251 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1172859171 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346988141469 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.63 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.3 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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