Dear John,
I am writing to bring to your attention a significant problem that I found a huge noise from your house at night recently.
I have found loud music in your home every night since last Saturday, sometimes I can hear other noises from time to time. The major problem is that sound is continuously playing at night after 11:00 PM caused me could not sleep very well, I woke up because of the noise. There is one thing that you did not know, my manager just switched me to the very early shift so I have to get up before 6 AM, without enough sleep I cannot work productively as well as impacting other neighbors.
I would like to suggest that if you do like to listen to the music I could borrow you my earphone. However, if you prefer to use a speaker to listen I appreciate that you can volume down it after 10:00 PM.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Joe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35294117647 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34584223224 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641176470588 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4668044075 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191766799104 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852048083387 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377586667794 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114224836601 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428820762764 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.