Dear Sir,
Myself Krishna Majithia, I am writing this letter with regret to express my dissatisfaction toward the quality of product as well as for after sales services.
What so happened is, I bought a Sony company television from your shop as on 3rd Jan 2020, but when it was delivered at my home and installed it did not work properly. As it was 4K quality television its picture quality was too normal also the sound bar did not give proper woofing effects. I have spend thousand of bucks behind this product and not satisfied at all.
For complaining the issue I called twice to your service department but to make the situation more worst they just transferring the call from one person to another. Finally, I received the reply from one of your staffs as, "this is not our fault mam, contact directly to the company". Is this way to teat your customers who spend huge amount for shopping at your shop?.
Now I would not accept any repairs what I want is replacement of the products as it is new and covered under guarantee. Also, please train your staff to behave polite with the customers.
Waiting for your earliest action regarding this issue.
Yours faithfully,
Krishna
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and installed it did not work properly. As it was 4K quality television its pictur...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...not give proper woofing effects. I have spend thousand of bucks behind this product a...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...ve proper woofing effects. I have spend thousand of bucks behind this product and not sa...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'worst' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: worst
...ce department but to make the situation more worst they just transferring the call from on...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...garding this issue. Yours faithfully, Krishna
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, regarding, so, well, as for, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82211538462 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61827735245 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668269230769 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8824801194 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1818181818 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116908089915 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421747377743 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319564506584 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511473350047 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336291905147 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.