Dear Maggie,
It has been a long time since we last met, and I hope that you are doing well. I am writing this letter to apologize because I cannot pick you up at the airport.
First of all, my best friend has unfortunately developed a severe chronic condition and moved into a hospital recently; therefore, I have to spend that day taking care of him. In addition, I am inundated with the assignment that my leader allocated to me two days ago, which would take a long time to complete.
However, you do not need to be obsessive about how to arrive at the hotel. Once you leave the airport, you have a series of options to reach the hotel. You can call a cab that would merely cost you approximately twenty dollars, or if you prefer a cheaper transport mode, you can purchase a bus ticket that charges you 10 dollars.
I will visit you at the hotel two days after you settle in. I intend to take you to visit the famous skyscraper, one of the tallest buildings in Melbourne, the rooftop of which allows you to enjoy a magnificent panorama of the whole city.
I hope that you will accept my apologises. I look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
David Villa.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 217 250
No. of Characters: 918 1200
No. of Different Words: 134 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.838 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.23 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.397 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 56 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.692 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.178 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.394 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.722 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.284 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...agnificent panorama of the whole city. I hope that you will accept my apologises...
^
Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ope that you will accept my apologises. I look forward to hearing from you. Be...
^
Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m you. Best regards, David Villa.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, therefore, well, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47004608295 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50104355038 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626728110599 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6663431667 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8333333333 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322086420873 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124704244779 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809479289584 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178521580573 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766665495223 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.