You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. In your letter*mention the food and service*expla

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You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much.

Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. In your letter

*mention the food and service

*explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere

*suggest any improvements to make things better

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><b><span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;</span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;Dear Sir or Madam,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;</span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span lang="EN-US">I am writing to you with regards, to

the express my positive feedback about the visit at your restaurant which happened

last week. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;</span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span lang="EN-US">Last week I was celebrating my birthday

with my friends at your restaurant. We were surprised with the service that

your restaurant provided. Our waitress represents high level of services and sense

of humor which make our visit even more enjoyable. Moreover, all the dishes were

delicious and their looks very attractive. It was extremely hard for us to choose

the best meal of the night but in the end we decided that BBQ pork ribs won our

competition. <br><br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span lang="EN-US">However, I would like to suggests

some improvements that make your place even more attractive. <br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span lang="EN-US">Firstly, the opening hours should be

longer during the weekends. Other places around are open until 12am and your

one just until 10 pm.<br>

The other things that I think needs to be change is the poor liquor menu I think

that you should provide more craft beers to your menu. Again compering to the

other restaurant nearby you provide small range of beers. <br>

Your faithful,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span lang="EN-US">Tomasz Zawadzki</span></p>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sit at your restaurant which happened last week.

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...st week I was celebrating my birthday with my friends at your restaurant. We were ...
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... were surprised with the service that your restaurant provided. Our waitress repre...
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...ents high level of services and sense of humor which make our visit even more en...
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Suggestion: Delicious
...oyable. Moreover, all the dishes were delicious and their looks very attractive. It was...
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Suggestion: Competition
...we decided that BBQ pork ribs won our competition.

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...hange is the poor liquor menu I think that you should provide more craft beers to ...
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Suggestion: Other
... to your menu. Again compering to the other restaurant nearby you provide small ran...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...all range of beers.
Your faithful,

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, look, moreover, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 937.175257732 234% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 9.94117647059 4.54256449028 219% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.6452178385 2.54303337028 537% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 290.88556701 181% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.4 1.41237113402 170% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 177.485606447 44.8134815571 396% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.727272727 76.5299724578 261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.29896907216 512% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.06868898133 0.216113520407 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554871143012 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437667003089 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559246666335 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645861514073 0.0580467560999 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.4 8.37731958763 423% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -16.5 70.7449484536 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 7.45979381443 275% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 40.37 8.71597938144 463% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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