You drive to work, but have recently had a problem parking your car at the office.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
describe the problem with the parking
explain how this is affecting you
suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir/ Ma'am,
I am writing this letter to express my concern regarding car parking at our office area. I reach office around 10:00 AM in the morning however, I don't find relevant space to park my car. There are many other employees like me who face the same issue.
I agree that there is not enough space in the basement, which is causing trouble for staff to park their vehicle. My most of the time gets waste in finding space on road. This whole situation consumes most of my time and in spite of reaching office early I am not able to punch my ID on time. According to me reason behind this whole situation is carelessness. People park their car any where without taking other into consideration. Also, due to lack of synchronisation in parking, we face difficulty in car parking. In addition to this, People from nearby companies also park their cars at our parking area. Which should totally be prohibited.
With due respect I would like to propose solution in this matter. Company should hire a guard for particularly this purpose. A person should be assiend to control parking situation and make it available for office staff only. As well as, a provision of fine should be imposed for wrong parking. It is a serious issue and I will be great full if, management takes immediate action to save our precious time.
I am thankful to you for listening my problem. Any quick action in this regard will be highly appreciated.
Yours Sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'AM'.
Suggestion: AM
...ffice area. I reach office around 10:00 AM in the morning however, I dont find relevant space to ...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ound 10:00 AM in the morning however, I dont find relevant space to park my car. The...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...y I am not able to punch my ID on time. According to me reason behind this whole situation is c...
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Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: ANY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
... is carelessness. People park their car any where without taking other into consideration...
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Line 5, column 611, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...so park their cars at our parking area. Which should totally be prohibited. With ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, well, in addition, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70930232558 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55407534802 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9763413325 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9473684211 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5789473684 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238961492381 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686969102588 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515838925609 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134120384278 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143915622218 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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