You exercise regularly and have been a member of many different gyms. Recently, you moved into a new neighborhood and joined a new gym. You have noticed that people at this gym do not bother to wipe down the machines after use and often leave dirty towels on the benches in the change rooms. Write to Mr. Koto, the manager. In your letter:
· explain who you are
· describe the problem exactly
· make suggestions to improve the gym
Dear Mr. Koto,
The purpose of writing this letter is to inform you about that cleaning of gym. I am Rajwinder Kaur. Actually, I was moved in this area last month. i am doing exercise in regularly basis. I took membership of many gyms. I saw your gym in my area so I joined it last week.
To begin with, I did not saw much cleaning in your gym. I noticed that allots of people came and doing exercise but nobody wipes down the machines. Some machines are wet from their sweat .In this pandemic situation this is not good. Furthermore, some are not taking their belongings with them. For example, yesterday one lady doing exercise on trad meal she put their towel on machine and she forgot there. Likewise, the changing room was also worse. nobody clean the space which we used for changing and washrooms are also not clean.
I can suggest you please make a rule and regulation for cleaning. if it is possible hire more people for cleaning. Moreover, I suggest you start taking fine from people who did not care about cleaning.
I am looking forward to seeing how my suggestions into prompt actions from your side.
your sincerely,
Rajwinder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, likewise, look, moreover, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3549610954 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624390243902 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8198889747 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.3888888889 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3888888889 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.94845360825 279% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226816288387 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604206505595 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513693385752 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117267846237 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712047651867 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.22 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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