Dear Sir or Madam,
This letter is to express concerns about regular evening shows that are being broadcasted by your station. Let me elaborate on why these are irrelevant and suggest some alternative ideas.
The current programs involve indecent and vulgar content which is unsuitable for children. Since I prefer spending this after-work time with family members, such uninteresting screening makes everyone uncomfortable and spoil children inevitably.
It would be much appreciated if you could display movies relating to science, religion or technology. Many producers these days provide TV series based on advancements happening in the society that would practically influence our lives.
These TV shows would help youngsters developing intellectual skills entertainingly by creating curiosity among them. As a result, parents could have useful conversations to clarify their doubts, and thereby broaden their horizons. Besides, the whole family can spend quality time and relax after hectic work schedules.
I hope you would consider my suggestion and alter the content screened in evenings.
Yours faithfully,
Pardeep Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, This letter is to express concerns about...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90419161677 4.54256449028 130% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90612319246 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.808383233533 0.622605031667 130% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4616387168 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6363636364 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140687648582 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465819063397 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451140794365 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720492335336 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413413888126 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.35 8.71597938144 188% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.0 7.59969072165 145% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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