You forget your bag in the gym and gym management announced that the gym will be closed for a week for some renovation work. You need your bag as it has important things in it.
Write a letter to the manager of the gym. In your letter
introduce yourself and describe your position
give them a description of your bag
tell them what you want them to do
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to you about my bag which I have forgotten at your gym yesterday.
I am the permanent member of your franchise and has always been a regular attendee. After my workout on friday while leaving the gym I missed my bag in the locker and now premises are going under maintenance for 7 days.
My bag is made up of canvas and is black in colour. Moreover, it is of Nike brand with blue strap having circular rings at joints.Additionally, it contains some vital documents as well. I will be in trouble if I dot not get those documents because they include my driving licence and vehicle registration paper.
Since, the gym is going to be closed for a week for redecoration and I cannot enter the premises. However, I need to get my bag, therefore, I am requesting you for special permission for further assistance to guide through the process to obtain it. I am positive that my concern will be addressed immediately.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to you about my...
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Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
...s. My bag is made up of canvas and is black in colour. Moreover, it is of Nike brand with blu...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Additionally
...e strap having circular rings at joints.Additionally, it contains some vital documents as we...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...process to obtain it. I am positive that my concern will be addressed immediately...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63535911602 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89886296493 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674033149171 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3573421785 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2727272727 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32623914863 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111942310265 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798134405653 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164534376072 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094804646464 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.