Happiness is considered very important in life.
why is is difficult to define ?
what factors are important in achieving it?
It is considered to be joyful in life. While, it has always been tough to describe in practical world. There are several aspects with propels in determining pleasure.
To emabark upon, happiness is an emotion which can only be felt. Moreover, it is the state when individual is elated due to any event or accomplishment.There is no written theory that eloborate the state of mind.However, expressions are the ony modes to define it. Moreover, it is a personal feeling and is always depend upon whether they wanted to share it or not. Additionally, there are several event those make human in high spirits but due to the confidentiality they do not want it to share with everyone.Each person has their own goals as well as aspirations and on cognition of them they feel satisfied.
There are plethora of agents which serve as basic ingredient to get it. According to me professional and personal achievements are primary one. All the citizens working in different professions has their own choices and completion of them serves as an impetus, thus brings satisfaction as well as smile on the face. Likewise, for students scoring superb grades while for sports person vicotry in the match is the influence to feel delighted.
To conclude, it is mandatory in this long journey of life to be cheerful. People should determine small means to gain it. Furthermore, it has always been difficult to put it in words but sharing moment can also become biggest factor to make happy to the underprivileged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t is the state when individual is elated due to any event or accomplishment.There...
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Suggestion: depended
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Suggestion: several events
...hare it or not. Additionally, there are several event those make human in high spirits but du...
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...y do not want it to share with everyone.Each person has their own goals as well as a...
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...ch serve as basic ingredient to get it. According to me professional and personal achievements ...
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...also become biggest factor to make happy to the underprivileged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9209486166 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04338072838 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0227876473 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9285714286 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0877690229448 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322669360941 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481909819049 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0565347676048 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356015087329 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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