You did a one day course at a local college, but you are unhappy about it.
Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter,
- Details about the course
- Why you are unhappy
- Give some suggestions
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the one day crash course which I completed last week at your college.
It was a full day program designed on machine learning and the possible uses of it in the current world. Beside this, explaining about the ability of it to solve complex reconciliation in various sectors.
Firstly, the seating arrangement was rudimentary and participants were uncomfortable throughout the program. Moreover, course has not explained the practical examples and success stories. Trainer during the course narrated the theory from presentation which actually was not contemporary according to the current market situations.
I believe, if the tutor has covered some real life scenarios of the machine learning , would have been more impacting. Additionally, it can be made more interactive with some task assignment during the course.
I hereby, request you to inspect about the complaints and rearrange one more class on the same so that it can be covered as desired.
Yours Sincerely
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42682926829 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03994828625 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689024390244 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8456998708 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216386675071 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676548829925 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761620108652 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108327969611 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889984478715 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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