Hi John. I am manjot kaur member of your gym from 2017. I am a software developer. I also taking gym classes in your gym. I left my bag in your gym on Friday.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: feroz121
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m from 2017. I am a software developer. I also taking gym classes in your gym. I ...
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Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I also taking gym classes in your gym. I left my bag in your gym on Friday.
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 26.3917525773 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 125.0 937.175257732 13% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 34.0 206.0 17% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.67647058824 4.54256449028 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.41473640277 3.78020617076 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17905252259 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 25.0 127.690721649 20% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.735294117647 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 39.6 290.88556701 14% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 8.0 16.3608247423 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 13.0598621739 44.8134815571 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 31.25 76.5299724578 41% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.5 16.8248392259 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364672594397 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174554464834 0.0766984524023 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151554681877 0.0603063233224 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.364672594397 0.12726935374 287% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 0.2 8.37731958763 2% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 97.2 70.7449484536 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 1.7 7.45979381443 23% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 1.99 8.71597938144 23% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 5.0 41.2886597938 12% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 8.62886597938 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 8.54432989691 61% => OK
text_standard: 2.0 8.15463917526 25% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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