You forgot something important on the bus you traveled on Write a letter to the bus company and say Describe what you are looking for You phoned the company before but their response didn t help you explain why What do you want the manager to do about it

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You forgot something important on the bus you traveled on. Write a letter to the bus company and say

- Describe what you are looking for.
- You phoned the company before, but their response didn’t help you (explain why).
- What do you want the manager to do about it?

I am writing in regards to losing my bag on one of your bus last week on 19th of July.
On that day, I had a meeting so apart from my shoulder bag I carried a hand bag too. It is a black leather ones which has a red mark in front of. All of my papers work were inside it and I really need them, without them I am in danger of losing my job.

When I realized I missed my bag, I immediately called your company and talked with one of your receptionist. He told me to go to the central station and looking for mission object department, however, whenever I went there, I realized this department w...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
I am writing in regards to losing my bag on one of your bus last w...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...d a hand bag too. It is a black leather ones which has a red mark in front of. All o...
^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'apart from']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.159090909091 0.220444632235 72% => OK
Verbs: 0.186363636364 0.167888034529 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.05 0.0606518309736 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0636363636364 0.0506257000042 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.186363636364 0.118615021944 157% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109090909091 0.107062808482 102% => OK
Participles: 0.05 0.041066498444 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57129714747 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0318181818182 0.0385302599488 83% => OK
Particles: 0.00454545454545 0.00132118243153 344% => OK
Determiners: 0.05 0.0714148451538 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00909090909091 0.0191574576366 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0272727272727 0.00930345855455 293% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1067.0 1141.60824742 93% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.134020619 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30845771144 5.53046319177 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78085437643 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.273631840796 0.284621296913 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.199004975124 0.211203875043 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0945273631841 0.133321485273 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0646766169154 0.0843313296314 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57129714747 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646766169154 0.622163163488 104% => OK
Word variations: 67.1577151704 62.8969750728 107% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1 16.4300151701 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0894237576 44.7399317507 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.7 90.9928171075 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.4300151701 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.613754768223 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 40.0004975124 37.5504026743 107% => OK
Elegance: 0.729166666667 1.13073093955 64% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187986659122 0.331212695627 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10030685777 0.0927372745006 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0657394675378 0.0736520305886 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.637574927541 0.579516596996 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.231255185234 0.180689518051 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787985740483 0.122183219658 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661603220364 0.0765303033291 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.183395826828 0.211926503985 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.084239172634 0.0737400523855 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122340415125 0.203819188451 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692979576008 0.067151250289 103% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.45360824742 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.48453608247 337% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 4.73195876289 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 1.03092783505 485% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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