You forgot something important on the bus you traveled on. Write a letter to the bus company and say
– Describe what you are looking for.
– You phoned the company before, but their response didn’t help you (explain why).
– What do you want the manager to do about it?
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Henry Fimibama and I recently traveled from Staten Island to New Jersey aboard the Manhattan Express on Tuesday morning, the 19th of February, last week. I purchased a ticket from the bus station on the same day and did not need an online reservation, like I normally would have on similar services plying the same route.
I remember getting on the bus with a navy blue cardigan wrapped around my waist. On getting to my hotel room, I realized I must have forgotten the cardigan on the bus.
I called the Manhattan Express customer service extension from a number I got off the company website and the lady who attended to me referred me to a complaint form on the FAQ section of the website. The form on the internet had information I had no way of providing like the serial number on the bus ticket I purchased and the last four digits of my credit card.
I am writing to ask that a lost and found complaint be raised on my behalf in search for the navy blue cardigan with a Yankees crest. My email address is henry.fimibama@gmail.com. I look forward to hearing from you with any feedback regarding my sweater.
Yours faithfully,
Henry Fimibama.
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Discourse Markers used:
['look', 'regarding']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.310043668122 0.220444632235 141% => OK
Verbs: 0.139737991266 0.167888034529 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0480349344978 0.0606518309736 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0218340611354 0.0506257000042 43% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0917030567686 0.118615021944 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122270742358 0.107062808482 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0393013100437 0.041066498444 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88666445875 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0262008733624 0.0385302599488 68% => OK
Particles: 0.00436681222707 0.00132118243153 331% => OK
Determiners: 0.122270742358 0.0714148451538 171% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00873362445415 0.0191574576366 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00436681222707 0.00930345855455 47% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1188.0 1141.60824742 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.134020619 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63033175355 5.53046319177 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78085437643 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345971563981 0.284621296913 122% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24644549763 0.211203875043 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165876777251 0.133321485273 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0805687203791 0.0843313296314 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88666445875 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582938388626 0.622163163488 94% => OK
Word variations: 55.7066056572 62.8969750728 89% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1 16.4300151701 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6039751254 44.7399317507 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.8 90.9928171075 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 16.4300151701 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.2 0.613754768223 33% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 45.744549763 37.5504026743 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.86206896552 1.13073093955 165% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347316107574 0.331212695627 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131990967438 0.0927372745006 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.109885702176 0.0736520305886 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.698727891244 0.579516596996 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151289885952 0.180689518051 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138355680466 0.122183219658 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825112951327 0.0765303033291 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.276592463181 0.211926503985 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0800136912434 0.0737400523855 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214157656826 0.203819188451 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486925037138 0.067151250289 73% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.45360824742 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.48453608247 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.73195876289 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 1.03092783505 291% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.