Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to draw your attention to a local restaurant that is providing quality service for its costumers and i request you to publish a review of this restaurant in 'Food is Life' section of your famous daily to let people know about it.
Recently i took my family to dine out at a local restaurant called Golden Spoon located in central London. The local mainly serves vegan food of which they are mostly well known. Initially, i ordered a vegan salad with avocado, some asparagus, kale and some different green leafs. The food was so fresh and delicious that we could not but order more mushed potatoes with chickpeas. Prices were relatively lower than that of other restaurants in that area. The waiters gave us a great service.
I can assure you that this restaurant is worth visiting for vegan food lovers who like to test different dishes, and they want the best return for their money.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any question, i would be glad to answer.
All the best,
Paolo
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67027027027 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35508246999 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702702702703 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9935381403 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229154942766 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644721608058 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688455807097 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134011102728 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696170456805 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.