To,
The Editor,
Toronto Tribune
Dear Sir,
I am a regular subscriber of your newspaper and fan of your special weekly pages on lifestyle. I am writing this letter to express my opinion on a new food venture that has been opened at Danforth very recently. I hope this can be one of your featured and recommended place to hangout with family and thereby, readers will be benefited from your information.
The Holandise is a new restaurant which is opened here last month. As because I am quite foodie, I used to explore every corner with my family at the weekend. Last Sunday night, I had the chance to visit the Holandise and to taste some of their recipes from the special menu. We have tried a modified version of fish and chips, which is really mouth-watering and anyone will indulge with flavorsome crunchy chips with soft and delicate fish. The fish was so tender that it was just melting in my mouth.
To be honest, this is really a great deal for Danforth community as the price is reasonable, customer service is wonderful and above all, the staffs are really professional. In addition to this, the kids' zone is really worthy for children. In a nutshell, the Holandise can be recommended for spending a quality time with family members. I hope, you can feature this in your weekly special pages and the dwellers will be delighted.
I look forward to seeing your new article on the next week.
Yours faithfully,
Kumar Sampad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... been opened at Danforth very recently. I hope this can be one of your featured a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76679841897 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58015287005 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584980237154 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.611173931 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124318080701 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402091139793 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274704481034 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645211937079 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273889218216 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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