Dear Mark,
I'd like to apologize for not being able to attend your party last weekend, as i was caught up in an urgent work at the office.
I was so excited to learn about your promotion as chief of staff in your company,but you know me; I would never miss your party at any cost. However, there was some pressing business proposal that needed to be prepared for a meeting with a client from China, who was coming only to understand the deal and close it the same day. I didn't have an option but to stay back and complete it.
In the future, I promise to not skip any of your events and for that, I propose to make the following amends in my schedule. Firstly, I'll always do my tasks on time and never leave it for the last minute. Secondly, I'll train my colleague in such a way that he will be able to get such work done at the zero hour. I hope that you will forgive me this time.
looking forward to hearing from you.
Keep in touch.
Mustafa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mark, Id like to apologize for not being able ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
Dear Mark, Id like to apologize for not being able to...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e to attend your party last weekend, as i was caught up in an urgent work at the ...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...motion as chief of staff in your company,but you know me; I would never miss your pa...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...d the deal and close it the same day. I didnt have an option but to stay back and com...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...llowing amends in my schedule. Firstly, Ill always do my tasks on time and never le...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...leave it for the last minute. Secondly, Ill train my colleague in such a way that ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for the last minute. Secondly, Ill train my colleague in such a way that he will ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...that you will forgive me this time. looking forward to hearing from you. Keep i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10248730919 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654054054054 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0943499819 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161459692271 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641074485489 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707023970158 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106709205611 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286405647001 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.08 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.