You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter:•describe the work you have been

Dear Sir,

I am Rosy Kate, working in your NGO as a Genetic Counselor from past 6 months. I am writing this letter in order to resign from my current post as a genetic counselor, as i have been accepted by university of columbia, and been given an opportunity to complete my post graduate program.

At your organization i was helping patients by giving them free genetic counseling with previous genetic history. I was very much happy and satisfied in doing such work, however due to my full time course at the university, i wont be able to continue this work.

I am felling really very sorry to leave such great work. I am grateful to you for giving me such an amazing chance to work and help people in need. To save you from some trouble in recruiting new counselor, i am suggesting one of my friend Cristina Molly, for the same role. She is been working as a genetic counselor from past 1 year. She would be a great candidate for this role. I have shared your contact details with her and she will contact you by tomorrow.

I hope you consider my resignation and accept my recommendation.

Thank you.

Your's Sincerely
Rosy Kate

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: fulltime
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...ly very sorry to leave such great work. I am grateful to you for giving me such a...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...me trouble in recruiting new counselor, i am suggesting one of my friend Cristina...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62621359223 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6302841594 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0457504505 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4166666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310957490548 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108427486594 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053041198661 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156703104776 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572848327595 0.0580467560999 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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