With new technologies emerging in this era, there comes a change in people's lifestyle. In olden days, everyone used to do their household chores all by themselves, however today its totally different. Nowadays most of these chores are done by using machines. This change in advancement of technology comes with bot positive as well as negative effect, which I will be discussing in this essay.
On the positive side, this inventions have had a great impact in one's life, especially, when it comes to save time. People who are working for 8-10 hours a day, find it difficult to complete their daily errands like washing clothes, cooking, cleaning utensils and dusting home. This all work now can be done by simple machines, that are available in the market, such as, Washing machines, Dish washer, Dusting robots, etc. With the help of these machines one can save a lot of time for themselves and can invest in doing their favourite activity or can just relax.
On the negative side it affects the physical fitness of an individual. As people were doing these chores by themselves before, they were used to be more fit, as it demands a lot of energy and physical strength to complete these chores. Due to the machines available in the market, people are becoming more lazy and less productive. They are using their free time either in sleeping or eating junk. This results in an unhealthy life style.
Though advantage seems very attractive as it gives an individual some more time to relax, disadvantages should not be neglectes. However, these disadvantages can be overcome by doing some physical activity in your routine life. Using this extra time for gym or playing you favourite sport can be a great solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to being'.
Suggestion: used to being
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91780821918 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58586817245 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4142829121 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278053808531 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862477710651 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682484064307 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167205605791 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427125694045 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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