Media has got a lot of attention in last few years. It is believed by some people that, it is becoming a trend for media to show more about the difficult situation and emergencies instead of the good developmental part. This may cause damage to the people as well as the community. I agree to this, as media plays a major role in developing one's opinion about the ongoing situation. i will discuss my points in details.
Firstly, media has a huge power, as it influences people all around the world. This power comes with a great responsibility, if not used in a right direction, it may lead to irreparable damage. One of the most trending news, that people are keen on, are the political news.
Nowadays, media is more directed towards the problem of a political party, rather than the solution that they provide for a
particular situation. They are showing more of a debatable situation, causing internal damage between two parties. In India,
in 2018 election, a statement released by a political leader was meant to be a generalized statement, however media portrayed it in a different way, causing differences between the two parties.
Another type of situation that causes a negative effect on the society is making a news overrated. Common people rely a lot on these news reports, and they are going to believe what they state, so they are easily misled. In July 2017, there was an alert due to heavy rainfall, but insted declaring alertness, they jumped to say that it has already started flooding, which created a big chaos among the people in that area.
I strongly agree that media these days are focusing more on the negative news, rather than the positive ones, causing wrong mind set of general people and the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82059800664 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63618279317 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9390049198 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206812455488 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628945065739 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656584467311 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987752467347 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804118991157 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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