In many countries foreign workers make up a large part of the labor, it is true that bringing in foreign workers can cause problems for the local workers but it has some benefits too. Like every other thing, it also has positive and negative effects. I will first discuss some of its advantages.
First of all, foreign labor is always cheap. By hiring foreign workers a country can get cheaper labor, which is profitable for the country. Secondly, foreign workers are prepared to do any kind of job, they can do the job at any location, they are comfortable for any shift timings, also sometimes they are ready for risky or dangerous jobs too. Whereas domestic labor
is not always ready to do these kinds of jobs. They give preference to location, timings, safety etc. Also, they ask for m
ore salary than foreign labor. So for that kind of jobs companies think of hiring foreign labor.
As I discussed earlier hiring foreign labor has both advantages and disadvantages. Now I will discuss some of its disadvantages. Firstly they create unemployment in the country. Secondly, they may not be loyal to a company or we can say country. They can leave the country anytime and they can change job anytime and thirdly they are ready to do the job at a lower salary which creates problem for domestic workers they also have to compromise on lower salary. So these are disadvantages of hiring foreign workers due to which people think a country should not hire foreign workers.
To sum, I would say first of all a country should focus on providing jobs to its domestic workers. After that country should think of hiring foreign workers so that no unemployment will create in the country. Those kinds of jobs will be given to foreign workers which are less paid and which are beneficial for country’s economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... ready for risky or dangerous jobs too. Whereas domestic labor is not always ready to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, kind of, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53641456411 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453968253968 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.556630847 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2105263158 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227390906029 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716209337875 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663163939059 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13019674952 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608124256708 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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