As it is said that Knowledge is the key to success, learning new things in a day to day life is very important. There are people who like reading in their leisure time and there are others who prefer to do other activities. The former people wish to have a public library in their towns, while the latter thinks otherwise. I will discuss both the points in details, and then take my stand.
Books are man's best friend, it helps a person to grow wisely. Nowadays many books and articles are available online, where any one can access easily. This has brought a revolutionary change in usage of hard copy. As on the internet most of the books can be download free of cost, which is more convenient for every one. Also, taking care of books, especially thick ones, is little difficult.
Using online materials is efficient as it reduces space, and the most advantage part of using e-book is one can browse easily and it is less time consuming. Taking about the cost, it incurs a huge amount in building a library and maintaining it. But library provides a friendly atmosphere for a readers and proves to be a good platform for interaction.
People of various age come can interact with each other, knowledge sharing is achievable there. Thought, it comes with great expense. The books needs to be maintain and also it needs to be arrange properly and time to time.
SO lastly I would conclude that, e-books are user friendly and cost saving when compared to building libraries and maintaining them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...nd articles are available online, where any one can access easily. This has brought a r...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'need'.
Suggestion: need
... it comes with great expense. The books needs to be maintain and also it needs to be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71212121212 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47406195412 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4022446296 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.75 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12519366905 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037812249568 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487928271355 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633871403387 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476918699623 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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