Science technology in the last decade has reached to some really great level. Especially in the field of biotechnology, where with the help of different research, we are able to produce genetically modified crops. Though there are both pros and cons when considering using such modified food in to our daily life. We will be discussing it in this essay in detail.
Genetically modified crops are something that is been in practice for some time now, it first started from cotton,and now it have been in trial for various daily food items like tomato, watermelon, chillies, aubergine etc. With great research comes other disadvantages too. As we are not sure that how this engineered crops can affect those consuming them.
When playing with nature, we should be really be careful. Changing the genetics of crop, may lead to introducing mutation in humans who consume them. This needs to be taken care while producing GM crops. Proper tests needs to be done to be sure if this can be consumed without any later effect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94219653179 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58184223351 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682080924855 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1310195334 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7272727273 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213753403613 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788446185552 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452498401027 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13876205891 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479083811106 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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