Computer technology has created a break through in last few decades. This situation has led people to perform their most of the routine task online, like bill payments, ordering grocery, clothes etc. Working from home as well as studying from home has become easy, as the internet is easily accessible by everyone. Though this new development has both advantage and disadvantage, which i would like to discuss in detail, and then take my stand.
New development in technology, that has helped many people across the globe to work and access the required information from their home, with the help of internet, has proved to be of great advantage. Working from home, is specially beneficial for mother's who can earn and take care of their infants as well. Apart from work, other household chores, that needs to be performed are also easy using internet. Many clothing and grocery websites offers discounts when done shopping online, using this money can be saves efficiently.
In case of students, who cannot afford to pay high universities fees, can register themselves for distance learning course, that are conducted online. This course are less expensive and can be undertaken by ant students wishing to pursue higher studies. Most of the e-books, that are available online are also free to download, so this also saves the money and help in gaining the requires knowledge easily. Along with such easy and cheap accessibility, there come some disadvantage too.
Computer technology have given a huge platform for accessing information easily, but the major draw back of its excessive use is, people have stopped meeting personally. Human to human interaction has been decreased, which may be a great problem in future.
Though this growing technology offers a lot of benefits to man kind, but still Limiting the use of technology for personal use would be advisable.
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- Stores should sell local food products and not the imported food products. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. Do you agree? 66
- You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter, give details of the job, explain why it is important to you, suggest that information your teacher could put in the reference. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... that are conducted online. This course are less expensive and can be undertaken by...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...decreased, which may be a great problem in future. Though this growing technology offe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, still, then, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15032679739 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65626576029 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7117655366 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181841976933 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620145985743 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755707236373 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954541334024 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691976981701 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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