There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development
he advantement of the computer has bee shaped many peoples thel traditional ways of life, especially on the peoples who are in working class and school days. These peoples need to go out for wotk or study prior to the computer generalization. The development of computer makes it possible for these poeples to optionally choose either going out or staying in the home to do their work as they can use computer to access whatever resources they needed. Personally, this new way indeed makes life easier, but we at the same time, cannot ignore the negative consequences behind and this essay aim to explore the upsides and downsides of this approach.
To begin with the bright side, the obvious benefit is the cost saving on transportation. Taking Hong Kong as an example, the cost of commuting is ranging from 20 to 100 dollar a day and it can impose a great burden even on middle class family, let alone the family under poverty line. This new model of working and studying can mitigate the financial pressure added on them. Besides, time saving is another benefit as the working adults and students can enjoy the time freed from transportation, especially for those who live far away from offices or schools.
However, reaching the conclusion that staying home for work or studying is positive does not mean we can ignore the detrimential consequences behind. One of which regards on reduction of face to face communication. In order to contact people for e home worker or student, It is common practice to use the email, result in setting back their communication skill. The effect will be more devastating on students as it is an essential skill they must acquire in their future. Another negative impact is that the atmosphere of home is not entirely suited for working or studying, leading to distraction. For instance, surrounding with the noise such as television, radio and even people chatting, some peoples may find it difficult to keep their concentration on work or study.
To sum up, staying home for work or study have both merits and demerits and it is hard to say which one is outstanding. Personally, the new working or studying mode is seemingly a prevalent trend, thereby, we should put our effort on how to tackle down or at least mitigate the negative consequence so that we can live better off.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
he advantement of the computer has bee sha...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
... of commuting is ranging from 20 to 100 dollar a day and it can impose a great burden ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, so, at least, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84422110553 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74833947401 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560301507538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5428230235 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231524896817 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658081576399 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405594803131 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121409343436 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319837206324 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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