The idea of going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree this statement?
The curiosity of studying overseas among the adolescents has never been faded, especially for those who are planning for university studying since there are a considerable number of advantages to them. However, not every of them enjoys the benefits. In this essay, both side of compelling arguments will be discussed.
To begin with the opponents, they believe that these young generations are not mature enough to handle different life difficulties on their own. For most of them, studying university overseas is the first time they separate from their parent. Even though they usually need not to worry about the tuition fee, there are still many challenges which can formerly rely on their parent such as cooking and accommodation that they need to work on alone, not to mention if the student get sick. If they are fail to handle these kinds of basic need, they have no way but returning back to their home country.
However, some peoples believe that these living encounters can be at the same time beneficial to the students. Indeed, it is the oversea study that can propel the students to be more independent and responsible due to that fact that they need to seek for the solution for themselves when they encounter different difficulties, especially suitable to this era of students. Taking the example in China, many of the students are bringing up to be over reliance upon their parent, which is the result of one child policy enacted in China. Inevitably, these students generally lack of living skill and usually grow into irresponsible person. Taking them to oversea study is one of the best ways for them to practice their living skill and gives them the sense of responsibility on their own life.
All in all, overseas study has both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, even though overseas study does have negative consequences and not all students can enjoy the benefits, I would still advocate that the students should take this opportunity as long as they prepare themselves both mentally and physically before starting the adventures.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.195187165775 0.247107183377 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.157754010695 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0695187165775 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0802139037433 0.0501214627716 160% => OK
Pronouns: 0.072192513369 0.0437548338989 165% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.128342245989 0.122226691241 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0401069518717 0.0403226058552 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69539795294 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0427807486631 0.0326793684256 131% => OK
Particles: 0.00267379679144 0.00163938923432 163% => OK
Determiners: 0.104278074866 0.0861772015684 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0187165775401 0.021408717616 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133689839572 0.011925033212 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2070.0 1933.35771543 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 316.048096192 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03498542274 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32361516035 0.374742101984 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.253644314869 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201166180758 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119533527697 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69539795294 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 60.0528643835 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5 20.7743622355 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9348325282 49.517814964 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.857142857 127.492653851 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7743622355 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 49.8644314869 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.1724137931 1.69124875643 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368333174033 0.332605444948 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11868269613 0.102741220458 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0796313733302 0.0668466124924 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.583725706975 0.534860350844 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168313504429 0.148594505496 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152455550135 0.134430193775 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669761914577 0.0742795772207 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.304552780123 0.324371583561 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104453584988 0.0638462369009 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234404738535 0.228012699653 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769241484175 0.058150111329 132% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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