Some people argue that the job opportunities for the local people are becoming less day by day because this jobs are given to the foreign people, which may lead to a financial loss among the local workers and that this needs to end. I agree with the statement, however there are certain jobs that demands certain criteria, that can be only fulfilled by foreign workers. In this essay I will discuss the positive as well as negative points for bringing in the foreign workers.
Firstly, there are some type of work that require certain skills and other type are more concerned regarding the looks of their employees, which they need to get in the business. One of the most common type of work that demands high on skills are Spa salons. In India, 65% of people working in spa are from Thailand. It is known that Thai people are one of the best Masseuse in the world. So bringing such skilled people into the country is a little easy, as the employment in India is easy for them, then their own country because, of high demand and good salary structure.
Another type of work that requires good looks is working as a Receptionist at Multi national chain of hotels. In India as well as other countries, in hotel business, they will hire a person as a receptionist who has great looks and great communication skill. Certain International Chain of hotels that are present in different countries, will wants to have a person in charge from their own country. In such cases the employers need to follow their selection criteria.
In order to stop or decrease the employment of foreign workers in one's country, the things that can be done is training the people in that area and making them understand the importance of that job. Some of people thinks less or certain tpe of jobs, so that makes employers to hire from foreign nations.
I agree that certain job profiles need foreign workers, however to support local workers financially, this position should be limited.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...re present in different countries, will wants to have a person in charge from their o...
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Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...se the employment of foreign workers in ones country, the things that can be done is...
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Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the people') or simply say ''Some people''.
Suggestion: Some of the people; Some people
... understand the importance of that job. Some of people thinks less or certain tpe of jobs, so ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75290697674 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45716239572 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488372093023 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2179250866 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135317775716 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484060873287 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692163107689 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103035298047 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934814946564 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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