You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish.
Write a letter to the admissions tutor. In your letter
• explain your position.
• apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day.
• ask also how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to an interview for a place studying in Alf College.
My name is Rahi Honarvar and I have applied for a course in Computer science and technology and consequently I have been invited for an interview in Alf College on 27th of June, 6pm.
I am afraid I have to inform you that it would not be feasible for me to attend this interview at this specific time since I have made an appointment with my dentist earlier and I cannot cancel it. I apologize for any inconvenience that I may have caused.
I would be grateful if it is appropriate for you to give me the chance in order attending the interview on 28th of June, 6 pm or even the mentioned day but later at 7 pm. I would also like to know about the length of the interview as well as any test that may be included.
Once again I apologize for the inconvenience and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nconvenience that I may have caused. I would be grateful if it is appropriate ...
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Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...en the mentioned day but later at 7 pm. I would also like to know about the lengt...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, may, so, well, as well as, i am afraid, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35393258427 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65011975299 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0864202328 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 4.34317383033 256% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279924661383 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111923266344 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527011110414 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145707785962 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449048894635 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.