Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Kumar Sampad and I am a candidate applied for a course at your College. I am writing this letter in response to the invitation for the interview received from your college which has been scheduled on 1st June, 10 in the morning. I am afraid, due to some prefixed issues, I will not be able to make it on that day.
To be honest, I am highly interested for studying International Business from your esteemed college and accordingly I have applied for the admission last month. And, it is my immense pleasure that I have been selected for an initial interview as a candidate on that course. Unfortunately, I have an appointment with my dentist on the same day that has been fixed more than one month ago. As you know, getting the appointment for dental check up is now getting tough and there has always been a long waiting list for patients. Therefore, I would like to apologize for the inconvenience and I am seeking an opportunity to reschedule my date for interview in any other day or any suitable time frame.
I also like to know about the probable length of the interview and any possibility for having an evaluation test during the process. This will definitely help me to a have clear outline on where to focus on as part of the preparation.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Kumar Sampad.
- You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish.Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologize and 87
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 10
- Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism brings more advantages or disadvantages. 89
- Online, people write opinions and reviews of services. Is it a good thing or bad thing.? 56
- Some people think that the government wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 677, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te for interview in any other day or any suitable time frame. I also like to k...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, look, so, therefore, you know, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64315352697 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7958123183 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580912863071 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6376334779 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.25 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280283879307 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975799044638 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477438802185 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144718265496 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059386077501 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.