You have been invited to deliver a speech about your country at the international meeting at an American college Write a letter to the secretary of the international community In your letter you should tell accept invitation and suggest preferable dates t

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to let you know that I am honored to accept the invation about the speech that I will give it at international meeting at ZZZ college.

I would like to suggest the date on 1st of August because that is the very first day at meeting so I prefer a good start. My speech will have 3 parts. Firstly, introduce the history of my country and let all the guest have a main concept, then, I will concentrate to talk about the recent event in China, which is how people celebrite the spring festival becuase that is the most important in my country. Finally, I would like to deliver how the Chinese welcome everyone come and view that land.

To be honest, I never been to ZZZ college before so I hope you could arrange a projector and well-sounded microphone so I am able to give a good speech.

Thank you for giving me this amazing opportunity and I would not let you down.

Yours faithfully,
Joe

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been never
... and view that land. To be honest, I never been to ZZZ college before so I hope you cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, so, then, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39655172414 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48247257824 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0857778969 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258834724021 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100025970642 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636214025109 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140640529001 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739620108511 0.0580467560999 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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