Dear sir or Madam,
First of all, I would like to express my gratitude for offering me to represent the pupil in the annual event "Graduation ceremony 2020" which will be held on 15th june .I am very much delighted and privileged to address the students with some motivationl speech at my former school.
As the high school graduation is a pivotal moment in most people's lives: an important point that signifies a shift in direction.For this reason, I would strongly feel to talk about the significance of teritary education such as types of courses available and its scope which will help them to choose correct path in their carrier. In addition to that, it would be helpful if you could let me know the approximate time that i am expected to speak for.So that I will plan my length of speech accordingly.
Along with that,i would like to know about the estimated students count attending the event for making some prior arrangments such as data projector,power point presentation etc., incase of more count is expected.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon and hope my visit will be fruitful.
Yours faithfully
Anjana
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, look, so, in addition, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10674157303 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06718935659 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696629213483 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.085568431 44.8134815571 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.5 76.5299724578 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 16.8248392259 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 4.34317383033 303% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.29896907216 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 2.54639175258 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177105788442 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885413351875 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501353009538 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0488901951566 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477846143509 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 8.37731958763 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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