Dear Mr. Arora,
I am writing this letter to inform you with regards to the problems that I have been facing lately due to water leakage from the air-conditioner that was serviced last week. Kindly arrange for a technician immediately to resolve this matter.
As per the rental contract, I have been regularly servicing all the air-conditioners for the last three years. This unit that is located in the master bedroom especially, has always given some or the other issues that are not acceptable. Last time, due to squeaky noise from this system my sleep was disturbed. Now, I find there is water leakage in the middle of the night. This is in turn is causing me a lot of trouble to sleep peacefully. I am unable to focus on my work and wasting a lot of my time sorting these issues repetitively.
Request you to urgently look into this situation else I might need to look for an alternative accommodation. You may book an appointment with the technician this coming Saturday, should there be a need to repair or replace this system.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Nur Amirah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'alternative accommodation'.
Suggestion: alternative accommodation
...situation else I might need to look for an alternative accommodation. You may book an appointment with the t...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing from you soon. Yours sincerely Nur Amirah
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77835051546 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77371799783 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9531398413 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.25 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213424584879 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676674409741 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612704804219 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132870609853 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428881422198 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.