Dear George
I hope you are doing well! How is Mary? Tell her that I asked about her too.
As I told you earlier regarding the new job that requires me to relocate to Melbourne, although me being so excited about the new role and of course Australia, I'm also a bit concerned about the shift. As you aware, I need to bring my parents also with me since there is nobody here to take care of them and certainly they will feel lonely without me here. Also, not to mention clearing the visa formalities.
Because of this sudden shift, without time for any research, I'm uncertain about different things such as food, cost of living, moreover the climatic condition and how it all will cumulatively impact our well-being.
On mentioning the above such as food, living expenses, and other necessities, I would be grateful if you could provide me some suggestion on identifying affordable accommodation with adequate comfort, and insights about the expenses and climatic conditions. This will really help me to plan a peaceful migration.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Best Wishes
Akil
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, well, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87165775401 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66752204913 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68449197861 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.3137738 44.8134815571 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 4.34317383033 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174109607613 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661755779111 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557582309752 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104411237059 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462265285279 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.