Dear Ms. Mary,
I am the father of Alex who is a student of the fifth standard and I am writing to express my interest in joining the school excursion to Canada that you have planned for this year.
First of all, I would like to tell you the reason why I am interested to join you in the trip. I have already been to Canada several times before and I am quite used to the country's locals practices hence I thought my presence would be a great support to you and the teachers. Besides, I also have gone through the tour plan and most of the places are already been visited by me, so that will enable me to make ease your program.
In addition to the above, since I am already a parent of four, I have good experience in handling children. I aid teachers by monitoring the kids throughout the trip and also I will take care of their nutrition and medical needs.
I have heard that some other parents are also joining the trip. Would you mind sharing their contacts with me? I think it will help us discuss the plans ahead and serve much better. It will be of great help if you could organize a casual meeting sometime in school with teachers and fellow parents to review our understanding and plans.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Thanking you,
Yours sincerely,
Akilan Palaniappan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, if, look, so, i think, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46666666667 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33749628639 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591666666667 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9608739228 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194944988219 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781075369336 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593283771879 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930025021791 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459570643396 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.