You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before.You have a friend who lives there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1) Explain your situation
2) Say why you feel unsure about living in the city
3) Ask some question about life in the city.
Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to share news with you that I will be moving to your city soon due to my new job. I seek your advice about the same.
Actually, With god's grace, I got a job opportunity from a very renowned it company but, I am afraid that whether it would be a wise decision to move to an unfamiliar new city with family.
I am unsure about moving there due to the comfort level of my wife and kids that they enjoy living here from past seven years. they even manage their living in my absence when I go for official tour for a week or so. We have a scheduled timetable for kids like school, swimming classes, library and so my wife has a routine schedule. moving to a new place means disturbing their routine and convenience zone.
I will be more than happy, if you get me through this dilemma and clear some of my doubts about lifestyle in your city, as you are residing there from last ten years. Suggest me the area to live where the lifestyle is affordable and family could adjust easily. Another biggest question is, what is the procedure for school admissions and can you forward me list of good public schools in the city. Also provide the details of extra-curricular activities in which I can enroll my children.
Waiting for your guided response eagerly.
See you soon.
Warm regards
HArry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...job opportunity from a very renowned it company but, I am afraid that whether it would ...
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Line 6, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...njoy living here from past seven years. they even manage their living in my absence...
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Line 6, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... years. they even manage their living in my absence when I go for official tour f...
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Line 6, column 336, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moving
... and so my wife has a routine schedule. moving to a new place means disturbing their r...
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Line 8, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., if you get me through this dilemma and clear some of my doubts about lifestyle ...
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Line 8, column 405, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...f good public schools in the city. Also provide the details of extra-curricular activit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4555984556 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36437864358 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2658998587 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9333333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279603556146 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886233069899 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08016367322 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134317953878 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102400900712 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.