Dear Reena,
I Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to apologize of returning your dress this late. I feel so guilty that I don't have the heart to tell you the truth why I can't return your dress.
To be honest, I have never thought that this could happened as I am a very careful person, but I am feeling very bad because I know it is one of your favorite dress and close to your heart as It was a gif from your dad.
I could have borrowed any other dress on my brother’s wedding. It was an accident when we were having coffee in the reception of the event that one of the guest accidentally stopoed me in a rush and the whole cup of coffee was splashed all over me. I ran to clean it with water immediately but the coffee stained all over the hims part of the dress.
I am hoping that the dry cleaner can take off the stain as he assured me to make it as good as new. It will be available to me by next week and then back it to you as soon as I have it.
Again, my apology. I am hoping you can forgive me.
With love,
Gurjeet kaur
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... doing well. I am writing this letter to apologize of returning your dress this ...
^^
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g this letter to apologize of returning your dress this late. I feel so guilty t...
^^
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ize of returning your dress this late. I feel so guilty that I dont have the hea...
^
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ress this late. I feel so guilty that I dont have the heart to tell you the truth wh...
^^^^
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e the heart to tell you the truth why I cant return your dress. To be honest, I h...
^^^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st, I have never thought that this could happened as I am a very careful person, ...
^^
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
..., I have never thought that this could happened as I am a very careful person, but I am...
^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hoping you can forgive me. With love, Gurjeet kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 3.95348837209 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10052402744 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567441860465 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3189940538 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203778154144 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681655992364 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538033678408 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109110750142 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563901345485 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.33 8.71597938144 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.24 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... doing well. I am writing this letter to apologize of returning your dress this ...
^^
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g this letter to apologize of returning your dress this late. I feel so guilty t...
^^
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ize of returning your dress this late. I feel so guilty that I dont have the hea...
^
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ress this late. I feel so guilty that I dont have the heart to tell you the truth wh...
^^^^
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e the heart to tell you the truth why I cant return your dress. To be honest, I h...
^^^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st, I have never thought that this could happened as I am a very careful person, ...
^^
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
..., I have never thought that this could happened as I am a very careful person, but I am...
^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hoping you can forgive me. With love, Gurjeet kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 3.95348837209 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10052402744 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567441860465 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3189940538 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203778154144 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681655992364 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538033678408 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109110750142 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563901345485 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.33 8.71597938144 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.24 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.