Dear Jane,
I hope you are well. I am really sorry that I could not return your MacBook on time due to an incident yesterday.
I would like to apologise for breaking down it which is cutting edge of computer technology and costed an arm and a leg.
As you know, I was supoosed to do thesis presentation on 20 June. Immediately after I began speaking, my tutor poured a couple of tea over it due to a mistake. I stopped and cleaned all liquid when I saw it but it stopped working.
I found a repair centre for luxurious electronic appliances in the morning in the suburbs of London and made an appointment to be repaired. Technician assured that it would work properly after some parts are replaced. If it is not convenient for you, I will pay for it each month. One again I am deeply sorry for damaging it and please accept my apologies.
See you soon,
Mary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n time due to an incident yesterday. I would like to apologise for breaking do...
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Line 9, column 286, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
... you, I will pay for it each month. One again I am deeply sorry for damaging it and ple...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45962732919 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6134975031 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67701863354 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7648773854 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2727272727 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175861674632 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621336344147 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586652688967 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804578011519 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362704343313 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.