You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain the situation
say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to inform you of a recent purchase of a Sony camera from your electronic store "Kamazon" in Perth. My name is Kevin and I live near 45 Suite road Perth.
For your information I am your regular customer and mostly buy electronic products from your store. Last week I purchased a Sony digital camera from your store. The camera was working fine at the store but when I reached home I was surprised to see that the camera was unable to start even after changing the batteries to new ones.
since the camera was under manufacturer warranty I immediately contacted your customer care representative and they advised me to return the camera. It has been a week since the camera was returned and still, the camera has not been repaired. I am a little concerned and disappointed with the service I am getting after buying a brand new product thus I would request you to replace and give me a new camera.
I hope to get an immediate resolution on this matter.
Yours sincerely
Kevin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in reference to...
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...in and I live near 45 Suite road Perth. For your information I am your regular c...
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...ter changing the batteries to new ones. since the camera was under manufacturer ...
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...hanging the batteries to new ones. since the camera was under manufacturer warra...
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...e camera was under manufacturer warranty I immediately contacted your customer ca...
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...lution on this matter. Yours sincerely Kevin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6847826087 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80198754735 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592391304348 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8016409007 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315506300533 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118513438879 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926395189498 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159195097204 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114421909235 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.