You have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field.Write a letter of resignation to your boss. In your letter-Tell your boss of your decision and explain why are you leaving.-Explain what you have learnt from your current job and how yo

Dear John,

The purpose of this letter is to regret to announce resignation from the current Managing Director position. However, I am happy to apprise you about the new job as Music Director in one of the Music Company. I am much fond of music and cannot find a more suitable job other than this. Therefore, I decided to commence a new career in the music industry. Thus, as written in the contract, prior fortnight notification has been given.

I learnt many managerial tasks in your organisation such as Managing resources, risk, teams and other miscellaneous tasks. Furthermore, I learnt the skills to remain in the corporate market. Especially, workshops organised by the company were highly useful in terms of knowledge, training and gaining experiences. Moreover, experiences and skills gained from working as a Managing Director were not less than any reward because it will be useful to use in future tasks. Most importantly, I found it much difficult to determine between the current position and proposal.

I request you to arrange a reference letter outlining position, duties, and achievements. I believe you will do the needful. I would appreciate the earliest arrangments for the reference letter.

Lastly, it was a pleasure working within your organisation.

Yours Sincerely,
Moses

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, The purpose of this letter is to regret ...
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Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o use in future tasks. Most importantly, I found it much difficult to determine b...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nts. I believe you will do the needful. I would appreciate the earliest arrangmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, thus, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29186602871 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99099324851 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2866349083 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7333333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236981710282 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072308089041 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650391225349 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12081772604 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333609260709 0.0580467560999 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.